Common Mistakes Authors Make Writing Art Orders!
1. Sending the artist the story, book, or series and expecting them to mine it for images.
You've got books conveying all the information you think will be useful for character development and portrayal, so naturally you want the artist to read them to get the correct interpretation of your vision. This is one reason publishers tend to do this step, because they're good at it. They've got editors that all they do is read all day. Artists don't have time to read all day, because they need their eyes for other things such as art. As nice as it is to have an artist who is acquainted with the stories, it's just unrealistic to expect them to drop everything and read a novel. This is a job, and throwing too much information at an artist to sift through for what they actually need bogs down the process and takes more time, time they could use to be making art. Time, that you will undoubtedly be wondering "what's taking so long?" This is why you write an Art Order, because that's what you are doing, ordering art. You've commissioned someone to do a job and they need clear, concise descriptions of what you want in order to provide what you want.
2. Assuming the Artist knows your character as well as you do.
I've worked with several wonderful writers that leave out key details in their descriptions. This results often in either having to take time to read the writer's mind or starting over when the author finds something wrong. I've had authors forget to tell me the character is undead or describe a creature but never tell me what it is in D&D terms. This isn't prose, it's a bullet list of descriptors. If you are describing a person and they remind you of Angelina Jolie or Nathan Fillion, those are huge clues to the type of face you want. Remember to include things like hair and eye color, body type, hair being curly, straight, or wavy, and other things to help the artist make this image more like a real person with as few setbacks as possible. It also helps to know tips to the character's personality such as stubborn, shy, strong, frail, and other such very visual cues. This is information that doesn't need to be a page long, but a paragraph or two. What do they do? Are they good or evil? All important information that can be reduced to short bursts of relevant information, without wading through superfluous words to get to it.
3. Constant Revisions
The side effect of not being able to give clear concise Art Orders means Constant Revisions, which is a waste of both of your time. It is a byproduct of the author not knowing what they want, indecisiveness, or unable to clearly express what they want. This is a good way for an artist to drop the job or not want to work with you again, when there are other clients who know what they want and can express it. Don't be surprised if you get charged for the revisions, because it basically means twice as much work and headache for the artist. If you don't know what you want and can't express it, wait until you can to hire an artist and do everyone a favor.
4. Expecting a Working Artist to be only working on your stuff.
Artists are jugglers and can often work on multiple projects at a time. I often switch paintings when I need to let one dry, or take on new jobs while working on others. Instead of poking the artist and distracting them from working, set a deadline with your artist within reasonable parameters of their schedule and let them work. Set a time for a preliminary sketch to be approved to allow for revisions, and then a time for the finished piece. THEN you can harass them, but you will find that you and the artist are far happier with the working relationship. Establishing realistic expectations is key.
Writing your Art Order: Information the Artist Needs to Proceed
To give you an idea of what needs to be given, I will provide an example in italics underneath.
This is important because color is twice as much work
Color Oil Painting
2. Output Size
How big is this going to be printed? If it is going to be small, then it will require far less detail than a cover piece, and the artist can adjust their project appropriately.
Cover Artwork 16x20inches
3. Setting (if applicable)
Before the actors come on, you need to set the stage. Are we Pre-Industrial, Medieval Fantasy, or on a distant planet. Is it in the mountains, in an inn, or the ruins of an ancient castle. Where is the action taking place? The artist doesn't need a map of the whole world, just a snapshot of where things are taking place now. If you use a character's name, be sure to name them in the description of the character, so the artist knows who you are talking about.
Medieval Fantasy, low-magic world. Daenerys is in the desert at night surrounded by burning embers from a funeral pyre on which she did not burn. She is naked and covered in ash but otherwise unharmed.
4. How many characters are in the piece?
Is this a cast of thousands in a huge war piece or an intimate and private moment between the two main characters.
One woman and 3 baby dragons who just hatched.
5. Who are the characters and their relation to each other. Why are they there?
Again not needing a novel, this can be as simple as a phrase like "astranged lovers", or "soldiers working together", "ship-mates", "rivals". What do they do? Is one a wizard and one a warrior? Is one a cop checking out a crime scene? Keep it short, clear, and concise.
Daenerys is "The Mother of Dragons" She is a dethroned princess who has hatched the dragons from eggs, producing the first dragons seen in a hundred years. The dragon hatchlings look to her as their mother and she is caring for them as one.
6. Describe each Character Individually
Again, be clear and concise, this is not a story, but a description more like a character sheet than a short story.
- Name
Daenerys Targaryen - Gender
Female - Race, Species, etc
Magical Human with the "Blood of the Dragon" - Profession, Class, Archetype
Displaced Princess of a medieval-esque kingdom and leader of a tribe of rough horse people akin to the Mongols. She seeks to restore her viewed birthright to the throne. - Height, Build, Body Type
Young, Early to Mid Teens, Slim, Attractive, recently gave birth - Abnormalities, what sets them apart
Immune to Fire, Driven Leader, Beautiful, Magical - Hair Color, length, style
Long wavy to straight white hair, worn in braids leaving long tendrils in the back - Eye Color, Eye shape
Large blue eyes - Face Shape - Oval, Heart, square, etc...
Attractive heart shaped face - Person or character you can compare them to physically
Emelia Clark - Personality - stubborn, shy, strong, frail, etc.
Fierce, Driven, Loyal, Compassionate, Brave - Clothing Description - What are they wearing? Is there a necklace that means something?
Dragons and nothing else - Emotional state of character in the picture - Shock, awe, romantic, sad, angry
Daenerys kneels in the pyre of her first love and so there is sadness, but also wonder and strength at surviving the fire and proving herself to her people by hatching her dragons. - Style
I would like it to be done in the style of Larry Elmore
7. Theme - What's the message?
Are you trying to say anything with this piece? Is it portraying the theme of a story about redemption, vengence, etc.
It is a picture telling of things to come, Daenerys like a phoenix rising from the ashes to take her place as queen with the help of dragons, and the rebirth of magic into the world.
It is a picture telling of things to come, Daenerys like a phoenix rising from the ashes to take her place as queen with the help of dragons, and the rebirth of magic into the world.
8. Remember that you get what you ask for!
If you don't tell your artist that the main character's left side of his face was burned in a fire, then don't be surprised if he doesn't look like it. Anything not falling under these suggested descriptors but important to the character should be shared from the beginning.
Picture should be from the side with strategically placed dragons to conceal breasts and naughty bits.
I hope that this blog has helped you understand a little better on how to communicate what you are looking for to your artist. It didn't not require every book George RR Martin wrote to convey this image, and yet still provided enough information to get the job done. If you hope to continue writing and working with artists, then I hope that this information will help you establish a solid working relationship with your artists.
Below is an excerpt of an Art Order from Margaret Weis Productions with the finished piece.
Dragonlance: Dragons of Krynn
Product Specs:
Title: Dragons of Krynn
Line: Dragonlance
Release: July 2007
Format: 160 page, full color interior, hardcover book
Art Dimensions:
1/2 page vertical = 3.125” by 9.25”
1/2 page horizontal = 6.5” by 4.25”
1/4 page = 3.125” by 4.25”
Total Page Count: 16 pages of art
All illustrations are either 1/2 page vertical, 1/2 page horizontal, or 1/4 page pieces.
References are as follows:
DLCS Dragonlance Campaign Setting
AoM Age of Mortals
WotL War of the Lance
BoK Bestiary of Krynn
BoKR Bestiary of Krynn, Revised
ToHS Towers of High Sorcery
WotL War of the Lance
HOoS Holy Orders of the Stars
LotT Legends of the Twins
KOoA Knightly Orders of Ansalon
RoA Races of Ansalon
All equipment references (armor, weapons, etc.) refer to Chapter 7 of the Player’s Handbook.
The following is the art order:
Illo #15: Amphi Dragon
Size: 1/4 page Location in book: Book 1, chapter 4
Two amphi dragons fighting underwater with one defending a ship wreck that it claims as its own. Description: This aquatic dragon resembles a giant, sea-green toad covered in scales and yellow warts. It has no visible neck, and its wide thick-lipped head looks like a cross between a frog’s and a dragon’s. Small vestigial wings grow from its back, and bony ridges protrude above its eyes and down its spine. Its long, clawed feet are powerful and webbed, aiding it in underwater movement.
